Tuesday, September 3, 2019
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Kia Ora , Leyton I really liked wht you explained what you are talking about like how, you made your charater say sleep early so you don't sleep in class.
ReplyDeleteTe ataahua hoki. beautiful mahi.
From Whare.
Kia Ora, Leyton I really like How you added lot's of detail into your background and people.
ReplyDeletedid you think about moving some of the stuff out of the way so you can see the word
from, Archie.
Kia ora, Leyton I like the way you explained why you need to wake up early for school. The facts you have used are really good. I like when the teacher writ on the chalk board "Also go to sleep early so you don't sleep in class." Ka pai! From Rautaki.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, Leyton I liked how you had lots of detail. Next time you should make the words bigger. Great job. From Isabella.
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